Illustration-Using+Examples

In paragraph 1, we are focusing on adding more details and examples to our supporting points. Please follow the examples and tips your text as you revise your work.

We will organize and write the first draft of paragraph 1 in class.


 * Prewriting:** When beginning the process of writing, you can write out a list, freewrite, diagram. Use whatever prewriting method works best for you.

Next, try to determine what your main __supporting points__ are. On an outline, you only need to include phrases or short sentences to remind you of what you intend to say.

I.

II.

III.

Now, think of what examples you can add to illustrate each point. Add ideas for examples below each point.

I. II. III.
 * A.
 * B.
 * A.
 * B.
 * A.
 * B.

Looking at your supporting points and examples, check for overlapping. Try to come up with a controlling (main) idea for your paragraph.

Topic: Main Idea:

If you've gotten this far, your paragraph is ready to be written. You have a topic sentence, supporting points and examples to specifically illustrate your ideas.